ext_196528 ([identity profile] cest-moi-01.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] miss_m_cricket 2009-07-18 11:31 pm (UTC)

Yesss, a third chapter! And wow, was it packed full of good stuff!! I especially loved that moment when Sarge had Bones/Reaper pinned, and Jim was bleeding all over the place, but he said, "I love you." Ohh, that was just perfect.

And this scene:
“Shh, don’t speak, let me just...”
"I'm dying...aren't I Bones?...I can feel it, my insides feel like they are disintegrating.”
“You are not going to die.” Bones informed him harshly... and knowing even as he said the words that he was lying. Jim was dying, bleeding out in his arms.

Ohh, this just killed me.

Cannot wait for the next part!

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