I . . . that was . . . GUH! Sorry, think my brain exploded back there.
Such description and feeling in so few words. OMG!! You have such gift and talent. I especially loved -
The doorbell rang.
Jim got to his feet and moved to his flat door, taking a deep breath before opening it. He had a second to see Bones standing there and then his back was hitting the wall, Bones mouth on his, Bones teeth nipping at his lips, Bones hands on his body, Bones lifting him, Bones nails digging into his skin, Bones, Bones, Bones...
It was wild, animalistic like their dance, hair yanking, clothes ripping, hitting every wall between the door and the bedroom and then not even making it to the bed as they fell on the rug and writhed desperately against one another.
Jim made obscene noises he had never heard himself make before, heard Bones grunt and growl and oh god yes! He was so close and his voice was breaking with the overwhelming pleasure and NEED and OH!
Writers can write lines and lines to a sex scene, but this blew all those away. BEST SEX SCENE EVER!
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timeasmymeasure
Exquisite wouldn't even come close to how this was
Date: 2010-12-30 09:32 am (UTC)Such description and feeling in so few words. OMG!! You have such gift and talent. I especially loved -
The doorbell rang.
Jim got to his feet and moved to his flat door, taking a deep breath before opening it. He had a second to see Bones standing there and then his back was hitting the wall, Bones mouth on his, Bones teeth nipping at his lips, Bones hands on his body, Bones lifting him, Bones nails digging into his skin, Bones, Bones, Bones...
It was wild, animalistic like their dance, hair yanking, clothes ripping, hitting every wall between the door and the bedroom and then not even making it to the bed as they fell on the rug and writhed desperately against one another.
Jim made obscene noises he had never heard himself make before, heard Bones grunt and growl and oh god yes! He was so close and his voice was breaking with the overwhelming pleasure and NEED and OH!
Writers can write lines and lines to a sex scene, but this blew all those away. BEST SEX SCENE EVER!
TYSM FOR THIS FIC, I ABSOLUTELY ADORED IT XD!